Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Voted for One

yo overall this battle was a good one so shout outsa to both of you on ya verses but I felt ones verse alot better he had sum good vacabulary to his verse n it looks like he put alot more thought into it

Mc ya verse was a little plain fo me Ya vocab was a little original n sum of ya verses really did click in my mind man.

Mc Bad Line:
My words lethal like aids, to them u won't find a CURE
My punches hit u harder than 50 to Jada in "THE MASSACRE
(Nah wasnt feelin it, Opinion, blah)


Structure on both was good as well as the flow didnt see any multies so it came down to punches n in my mind One came alot harder

One ya need to get a little more severe wit the punches n touch up on ya structure a lil bit

MC ya punches need to elevate alot gotta hurt him, not throwin petty shit at him ya structure like his needs a lil touch up

Didnt see any personals so that is a nobrainer

So overall:
Flow- Tie
Punches- One
Multies- None
Structure- Tie
Personals- None

Good battle to both of you, elevate on the tips n keep rappin, good battle

holla