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Old 03-17-05, 06:17 PM   #15
ethiks
been dope.
 
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[FONT=Tahoma]kon:
aight verse. you had some good structure, and good flow. liptstick line just killed em. it dont really matter you didnt use any personals, you didnt need them....and i guess you knew that. your punches were ok, nothin to special, but better then his.

heat:
your verse was half ass. i dont have much to say bout your verse, but the lines are streched......you had maybe
one decent punch. and your lines were way to stretched. but keep elevating.

v/kon