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Old 03-17-05, 08:24 PM   #25
LyricalMa$tamind
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Voted For: Young Blaze

Young Blaze
Get something for the Herpes G, and im the city spud while you so juvenile they call you the murhpy lee/
Faggot sayin he murkin me, but your shits like the unemployed the way its not workin G, and even if he rapped with a switch blade he still wouldn’t be hurtin me/

you smell so gimp be gone, I only see a nerd, T's a champ? yea of special-Ed Olymp-ions/
Wasting this, witch 1 line I got rid of him, I could strap a bomb to royal and he still couldn’t blow up… even if they was Palestinian/

Aiight trick, you can drop the act ya bitch, cos I’ll stretch you out with a rap to diss, and crack ya clit/
we all know you cant rap prick can only clap dick, you spit so much SHIT its like your tongues a laxative/

Your just a bitch, you blast and miss, speaking of miss you probably gotta squat your ass just to piss/
im sorry I had to bust your tits, but you called me out so in other words.. this ass kicking? you asked for it /
My flows are toxic, so like anthrax terrorsists im choosin you, and like Harvard grads im rooming you/
i dont care though, cos you just 1 of those gooney loons , cos your rhymes are like re-runs of the fukin looney tunes/

Leave you fleein the coast and as quick and easy I can finish you.. I’ll give u a reason to boast/
14 years ago, I hit up Royals mom with a "punchline", and in "9 months", she got the "joke"/ (ooooohhh shiiitt)

lots of disses
nice punches and good structure
nice elevation
8/10

st royal
iight yo lets keep this rap plain and simple/you got bigga titties then ya girl and all u got is nipples/listen herre young blaze /my rapz can have you amazed for dayz/u cant rap so why dont u stop while you ahead/and if u brang dat shit u sayin to to da atl best believe u gonna get feeled up wit lead/dawg u soft u need to come at me strong/cuz u da type of nicca who would wear a medium size thong/u dumber than all dem niccaz who voted for bush in da election/little ass probably cant even get an erection/my niccaz say i remind them of Ali/ cuz im da king of da world thatz why they call me royal_t/i aint a pusha im a ridah/ya girl is to but in a different way cuz she like to ride a.............../man i aint even gotta go there/cuz yo ass softa then a male who does hair/now go ahead and say yo dumb shit like a fuckin doof/i aint tryna be man im just tellin u da truth/cuz u gettin old just like a rerun/and tell ya hoe ass girl i wont my fuckin refund

work on structure
a little hard 2 read
good disses
not as many punches on opponent
work on elevatin n u b iight
7.5/10

my v/Young Blaze

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