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Old 03-17-05, 09:26 PM   #49
LyricalMa$tamind
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Voted For: Murdz

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I'm blazin like an Uzi firin on all cylinders/
I gas pumped Prophysics ma, like a car, I opened her ass, and started fillin her/
Prophysics is like a faggot’s brothel, stuffed with talent less whores/
I'll Cry Havoc and let slip the dogs of war, stranglin' em all with my microphone cord/
Regarding rhymin in battles, harsh lesson’s you’re bein’ taught/
I’m the King Arthur of this rap shit, you’re getting’ mauled by Excalibur’s sword
I’ma use it to slaughter you bitch, butcher him till nothin's left, /
the way I'm murderin' you now, your peeps will be lookin' to avenge your death. /

like all da punches
good structure
tried 2 cram som lines in
iight verse
elevate a little more
7.5/10

Prophysics
damn yo your just a fake ass herb tryna descise yourself as a newb

look even in this kids sleep he couldnt full fill his dreams
cuz your style is still worn out like da knee part on ur moms jeans
just cuz u fuck fat gurls doesnt mean your doin big things
see your dealin wit the son of god, creativitie aka jesus
lrycally fucked up ur gimmick and left you wit vanerial deises
my punchlines hitten your face leavin ya def in mutation
have u facin a loss, now u eye to eye wit a critical devastation

attempted punches
not as many hits as opponents
wurk on elevatin and betta rhymes
6.5/10

my v/murdz

ay yo holla back on my battle below
see wut u think of it
only 20 posts to vote
jus return da favor wit a good explanation like me so its not cheatin
please we need votes yall
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