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Old 03-17-05, 10:02 PM   #13
metaman
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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

this was a pretty easy one to decide in my book:

structure: lyrical's structure was on point... i was feelin the flow the whole time... fame's was kinda hit or miss with each bar, some lines were stretched, and some werent long enough... it was aight, but not good enough

punches: this goes to lyrical too... he had good wordplay and creative punches... fame, tho, didnt... opener was poorly worded, but a nice try... pounds line is played... to and fro line was wack... the effort was there, but it wasnt good enough this time...

overall: lyrical gets this one with good structure, flow, and hard hittin punches... no hate jus elevate

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