actually....topic is "the one girl your in love with"....remember, theres more than one way to tell a story...you have to be able to write though.......and red's does tell a story man whos in love with a girl, he just took a different route to it.......you took the predictable path tony, not that it was bad, but you didnt have that great of imagery, mainly because your vocab is poor..........plus, you better not be talking about me ducking....or else i'll merk you

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