Thread: phive vs rooq
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Old 03-17-05, 11:30 PM   #19
Stanza
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Voted For: rooq

Aii Im Not gonna say alot but .....

Phive

I Dont Like ya structure at all I think You should jus post a regular verse and leave all the phancy spacinga out of ya verse .....To me You came Weak ....You hade some line where i was like ,,,,,..Damn he couldve done way betta than that Like your fiirst Bar was a big mistake becuase automatically ppl are gonna stop reading bcuz you didnt open up strong enough But Still Like i said ya verse jus wasnt on target it shouldve been alot more betta than that But ......
So you Dont get my vote

Rooq
I Like ya style You hade some very good lines that made me Laugh .....Scared lol All : and alot of other emotions I Think My favorite bar was
who'd want to "lay phive" when dudes got No-Penis?/
gift-wrap this battle and bitch still Won't-Seize-This
Jus one of my fav bars but you did very well and thats why u Take this battle With Much Ease

HEY!

RTf In The link in My sig i Only Have one battle please rtf

Thanx
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