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Old 03-17-05, 11:44 PM   #14
Triple_N
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Your flow was almost strait...it still sounded like u was reading an ya delivery seemed forced..I could tell u was conciously trying to fluctuate your voice....which isn't good...it was robotic sounding......the lyrics were comical though....you need to shorten ya lines tho...like cut a syllable or 2 an ya flow would sound smoother.....good beat choice...20 was cool on addlibs...quality was good......with elevation you'll be ah'ight.............overall 6.5/10
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