Fro a hot sec at the intro you sounded EXACTLY liek Q. Your flow over the entire song is way off. You're talkign at a whole differnt tempo than the beat. Some of the lines sounded real generic like "you sound like an uncircumsized Jew" - whne an uncircumsized jew don't sound much different from a circumsized one I'd imagine, lol. Beat choice was cool. Sounded liek it was gonna get somewhere but didn't really do a whole lot. The vocal quality was pretty good. You're pretty good with the spit except the fact that the verse had some shit that jsut sounded forced and it was at acompletely differnet tempo - sounded liek it was originally recorded over a differnt beat.

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