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yo you had good shit but you need to re-word alot of your lines, if you would have worded them better this would have been a dope ass verse, also i dont like your structure, its kinda ugly, LOL but yo, you need to build your vocab becuase you used the word wack in 2 bars, so fix that, also, work on your metaphores, you got mad potiential

other guy....you alright, kinda seemed like you typed it up fast becuase i couldnt understand halkf of it, but from what i did read i can see that it was wack, your closer was real wack, it was dumb , lol made me laugh becuase it was so dumb, LOL but yo elevate

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