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Old 03-18-05, 08:04 AM   #27
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Black Poet
 
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From: London
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Voted For: Premanition

Alright Prem clearly won this battle,

Karma come with,,,.. A nice opener but the verse
slipped off after that. Didn't really have any punchs
flowed alright but thats about it.

Best Bar,..
Prem, really I could slow down & slice you.
....But your too far behind me.
^Witty but only that and elbows was at the table^


Prem come with,.. Nice opener with a personal and
a bit of witt,.. Flowed floorlessly.

Best bar,..
Dialect Seeked A Vet, That U Bout To Regret But Thx 4 Da Props…(*)
Only Thing I Look For In Ur Verse Is The Significant Full ‘Stops’.’…(**)
^This bar killed it alone, need I say more. Prem won
this battle easy.

Vote ~ Prem

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