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Old 03-18-05, 08:43 AM   #9
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Voted For: Texaco

armada- bad:not a very good verse, structure was off, flow was off bad ending, bad opener, coulld improve on vocab
good:you DID have SOME good punches
texaco- bad: not good, but you did better in more areas than armada...also not that impressed, weak punches, no multies, bad vocab, bad ending
good:nice opener and structure

both- elevate yall, work on vocab, multies, and punches

breakdown of my vote-

opener-T
vocab-tie
multies-Tie
punches-A
werdplay-T
ender-T
flow-T
structure-T

v/Texaco

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