Voted For: Kamikazee

FI-good:nice verse, liked the punches and werdplay especially, good opener too
bad:didnt really like the closer, couldve ahd some multies, up the vocab a tad bit 2
fav line:3-4, werdplay is fucking crazy

Kami-good:nice werdplay and punches throughout the verse, good structure, nuice vocab,good ending
bad:didnt like the opener, coodve used multies,
fav line:line 4, nice job there

breakdown:

opener:FLow
closer:Kami
flow:tie
punches:Kami (had them throughtout)
werdplay:Flow
structure:tie
multies:tie
vocab:Kami

overal-very nice battle, toguh decision here, it was close

v/kamikazee

rtf...link in sig