aight this my beat me,and my crewmates killed this beat...aight production needs work ma...i can here where you stopped recording and started the next few lines...cause by 1 of 2 problems your cutting not accurate or you dont start spittin for the next lines by doing a few words you did for the last line...if you do it'll help make a smooth transition...you tryna have a continueous flow...but you gotta know where to take those breathes...and you gotta have the syllable count accurate...sound like you rushing at times...lyrics were good...i hear the multis


overall it has potential but it needs some work...keep doing ya thing aight fam...holla at me. 1

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