Voted For: Lord.Wun



wun
got this 4sho...
Came sick with the multies an a few decent personals here n there, punches were nice too, overrall besides the way u structure your rhymes, there aint much i can fault, nice verse....9/10


khoas
l, ya structure was everywhere too
dont seperate bars like that man
gotta be more creative with the rhymes u choose ta use
Overall 6/10



no hate, just be more creative

wun got this for the overrall better verse

RTF In ANY of my battles ya see floatin around on front lines or whatever

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