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Voted For: GlocKoma
this was pretty easy
im giving this to glockoma...your punches hit and were well thoughtout, you had nice personals/plays of his name...you stayed consistent dissin him, nice multies....structure could a little nice....but it flowed nicely...although, the behind my bars line, that is kinda played, only real problem with your verse...but overall....this verse was actually really nice, good vocab and wordplay which added effectiveness to your punches, and your shit was entertaining too
david, i dunno man, you werent really dissin glock at all, you just kinda was rappin randomly....you had some attempts at personals, but poor vocab/wordplay just made them sound weird, i dunno, looked like you didnt try, and thats not why your gettin my vote because, really, you didnt come hard at all, no connecting punches, few personals, but they were weak....no hate, but you still gotta elevate
v/glockoma
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