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Old 03-18-05, 02:12 PM   #9
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Voted For: LexiKon

Lexikon, you had a nice verse...was good, honestly... great structure.. good wordplay...vocab had sum hard hitting punchlines in it..ur flow was on point & u stayed consistent thru out this battle..so it'z not bad at all

Epical, lame verse here.. Opener was not the best, & the was kinda played.. seen shit like it before... rhyme wasn't consistent punches really wasn't really hittin'..& structure it betta so it can b alot more original.. Ya closer didn't start off nice... I think you could have had a more complex verse with better and more personals, and nice punches throughout if u elevate & practice more on ur wordplay...

Overall, Lexikon takes this with more complexity and better and harder hittin personals...Deh Messiah it was an ok verse, just coulda had more personals, and coulda came wit more complex shit, so my vote goes to..

V/Lexikon
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