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Old 03-18-05, 02:48 PM   #6
A_M_H
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this was an 1-sided battle all the way thru:

Boochine-Nice, Ok, punches was good, effective. Flow was alright, dont stretch your lines that much babygirl. u had some good personals....Wordplay was nice, but still elevate on that........overall ok verse still need elevation in structure and wordplays....punches also........

J mindz-i c if u work on it more cuz u got potential. Punches was ok, elevate...Use personals with them punches.......Wordplay's was kinda weak.......Flow was eh ok..........need help with using personals and multi'z...Punches also........In ya verse you had ok punches effective.......wordplay's was ok not good but ok......

overall=In my eyes (opinion) I know boochine got this battle, either though that boo and j hit at the same level in sum spots, boo came a little better than j.....Punches was ok on j, effective.......boo came a little harder and more creative with her punches.......Wordplay was also harder........j good verse got potential keep it up...but i gots to vote for Boo basically with harder punches and wordplays

also ma make sure 2 return the favor in 1 of my battles