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Old 03-18-05, 03:49 PM   #17
ethiks
been dope.
 
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Voted For: David

david:
aight verse. nothin too special. your structure was ok
i guess. the flow was decent.....but not to good.
try addin wordplay & multis in their, so it will flow better.
you only really had one decent punch, but it was good enough to get my vote.

glock:
you verse wasnt so good. your structure was shit, couldnt catch the rhythm. a battle is not bout whos
structure is more fancier....its bout punches, flow,
personals....ect. but keep elevating.

v/ david

return the favor....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181275