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Originally Posted by Tmka"D"
cause by 1 of 2 problems your cutting not accurate or you dont start spittin for the next lines by doing a few words you did for the last line...if you do it'll help make a smooth transition...you tryna have a continueous flow...but you gotta know where to take those breathes...and you gotta have the syllable count accurate...sound like you rushing at times...lyrics were good...i hear the multis
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^^basically what he said, i notice the cut too, but you are more clear on this track than any other track you laid out.. except the beginning needs boostin of volume like u said, cuz i didn't even notice u were startin to rap.. lyrics were nice, u just have to work on ya flow a lil'... stay up, laydee.. ha get at ya girl sum timez
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