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i liked this track.. the beat was str8.. Doomsday- u missed emotion through out the whole beginning, flow was pretty decent. the chorus needs sum type of an effect, i thought it was part of your verse Doomsday until i noticed it again after Trips verse.. Triple your verse i was feeling it lyrically, flow-wise it was pretty good for the type of beat it was.. this coulda been so much better, but as it is.. it's str8. nice positive message, but it shoulda ended earlier, or faded out or sumthin, the chorus got annoyin towards the end.. not bad fellas.. stay up. 1
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