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Voted For: Red Bull

Tony Green-nice drop you are good at topicals. you had a nice verse. your wordplay was alright. you had somewhat of a messy rhyme scheme. though.. but over all i thought that you really put some effort into this. you had nice imagery and emotion which is good. you had alot of metaphors in your drop which was good. i just think you could work on vocab and structure a little more ... no hate i was feel'n ya drop

Red Bull- wow i think your drop is one of my favorites ever. your story line was amazing i thought you really expressed yourself on this one. there is alot of emotion in it. i could imagine the feeling in this. this was a really good drop you took this to a new level. ok you had really good wordplay ... perfect.. it was just reading this i thought that the reader could relate to it .your rhyme scheme was on target the whole way through and your flow was just off the hook. i hate jumping on your balls like this but this is really a good drop. i suggest you turn this into a song or record this because this is some real talent..

i'm gonna give you my vote because you just brought it to a new level. tony green you dropped hot but it can't compare to RB .his just had to much emotion and honesty in it

nO HATe

Vote//Red Bull

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