Voted For: Non Capisco

ThaEViLGeNiUs GL - You dropped an allright verse. You really should have taken adavantage of the line limit and went farther with this. You had some good ideas. Your structure could have been better, and it seemed like you forced most of your rhymes. The emotion was allright, and the ending was okay...but you didn't flow as well as you could of, and the story really wasn't thought out that well. But for your first topical...nice drop...just elevate a bit on using more emotion, think out a better story line, and get a good good structure....6/10

Non Capisco - Good drop man. You had a half decent structure but it brought a good flow to your topical. The vocabulary was pretty good and it added to the emotion of this piece. Good story line, it flowed good and made me want to continue reading. Keep up and elevate a bit on your structure and you'll drop a bit better....This was pretty good though for your first topical...7.5/10

Vote: Non Capisco