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Old 03-18-05, 08:19 PM   #13
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Meta- eh not really feel'n your drop man. but you had some alright wordplay and your rhymescheme was a lil off.. work on your struct and your personals... you mighta have taken this one if you actually dissed him but you sorta smack talked him .. your gett'n better though

UN- alright drop your punches were weak but i thought that you did come harder. you were straight to the point and your sorta lacked creativity but over all thought you had better vocab better metas and better wordplay fix your structure though and get rid of the " marks they are very newbish...

over all a weak battle no hate just elevate.

Vote// Unregisterd

i voted for un simply because he rhymed and threw a few punches and metas

return the favor and drop a honest vote link is in the sig
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