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Old 03-18-05, 09:32 PM   #4
lost_cause
Banned: Cheating
 
Posts: 36
IP:

nice verses peeps but Wicked definately took this.

A_M_H: Ya verse flowed so good man, it was looking like a fuckin topical. That fat - mcdonalds thing was going at start, middle and end. Your punches were real good, some nice metas, nice vocab and decent structure. Easy to read and enjoyable too. -Long and full of quality.

Best bar: "ya get beat up for ya change when u walk into the schools halls
run home hide in the corner cryin and poundin ya flabby fists on the walls"
-Liking this for some reason loads.


Opponent: Nice verse bro, with some real good punches. Only reason you lost this is cos he had the volume of quality wen yours was in moderation. Ya opener was good and your close was sublime! Well done for making this red hot verse but oyu should have extended it.

best bar: "Fuck faggot, dickrider...how can you say your straight
You'll do anything for White, and it wont be cocaine"
-This is good, and your closer too.

No hate Poppy, keep doing ya thing
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