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Voted For: I. Mind

Dabato- i thought you had a very nice , organized, drop, your word play was very nice and i thought that you dropped something that displayed alot of honesty and emotion... which is essential in a topical battle i think... your rhyme scheme was on target and i thought that you really took the topic and ran with it. over all you had good wordplay and vocab.. and very nice imagery

Li your verse sorta threw me off with its struct but otherwise i thought that it wasnt as well thought out as dabatos .. you had alot of good vocab none the less.. but it wasnt put in a easy flowing attitude .. i thought dabatos flowed.. while yours just seemed a little forced at times..but over all you did have a nice drop... work on your struct thats all i gotta say otherwise dabato takes this one for having more emotion and better wordplay ....

Vote.//Dabatos

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