Thread: sabre vs heat
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Old 03-18-05, 10:28 PM   #11
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Voted For: sabre

well sabre automatically gets this one because it is clearly stated in the rules that its 8 lines

but anyways i thought sabre took it he simply had better word play and better punches..you had really good wordplay and on top of that your verse made sense..

heat..i can tell that u can rhyme now all you need to do is elevate you have the idea in your head you just don't know how to put it out so it causes a punch so work on your punches and personals and metas... your wordplay was half decent but check your spelling next time please thanks

Vote.. sabre because he followed the rules.. and he had a harder hiting verse.... RETURN THE FAVOR LINK IS IN THE SIG
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