Thread: . . vs eph
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Old 03-19-05, 02:07 AM   #14
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Voted For: eph

hmm, yeah, lets do it like this

eph, had some pretty solid six in there, i enjoyed this verse, your structure flow was good, easy money there.....vocab and worplay, decent, nothing special but good none the less....personals were good, thought you did more damage with punches, but you did good on both those aspects....you stayed more consistent with dissin, came harder, decent drop here

quotables:
joined RV as of today, wants to show some promise.
dun i'll stump ya, like iMacs in the hands of the omish.
says hes dope, but ya got less lines than a commuter lane.
so much for rep, we cant even pronounce his user name.

. ., nice opener, but i feel you got kinda weak after that....had some major played shit there, nothing special, thought intro was the best line, structure was off at times, but it flowed decent....not that good of personals or punches which is what separates you two....wordplay was okay, vocab can be upped....like i said, came out with a solid opener, then just faded away.....

v/eph
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