Voted For: Red Bull
aight this was kinda wack battle but kinda onesided as you may already know,
RED, decent shit, could have been a lil shorter, like 15 lines shorter, and your lines where kinda stretched thats why your font is so small, but other than that, this was a str8 topcal abttle considering its your first one, but you need a lot of elevating to do, just keep battling alot more topical poeple, i discredit the fact you battled a newb, and plus hes in NOK which automaitcally means he sucks, so other than those minor things , this was a bad batle but good verse from you
tony, you are not that good, you need to elevate alot, try to battle people with less wins and then elevate alot, LOL you need to find a dictionary and lok up words, becuase your vocab was kinda weak, you also needed to fix your structure and shit, you also could have re-worded alot of your lines to make them sound and be alopt more better, you could have also used alot more emotion, other than that, elevate,
this was a wack battle becuase it was one sided, redbull your new to topicals but you still should have battled someone better
vote=redbull
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