I really loved reading this poem, it had like these different levels in it that make you stand still here and there.

The emotion was very strong, had a a somewhat sad and yet so powerful, strong vibe over it. Bit agressive at times even, like keeping your head up high when everyone else would keep it down (don't know if this made sense but you know what I mean lol)

The vocab was very good, you had a nice balance between basic and complex, it was suited for the content of your piece.

I like your writing style a lot, at first sight it might seem a bit simple but in reality, there are more levels and more content in your poem.

Keep it up girl!

DQ

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