Banned: Cheating
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Voted For: PoEtIc~ViZiOnZ
Heat: wasn't feeling your approach on the topic, it'z like u didn't understand what u were writing about, it'z like u couldn't find a good balance between basic and complex vocab. Emotion wasn't shown, needs serious elevation...
Flow was decent (might be improved with multis), you stayed consistent throughout the whole
thing, just left me guessing...betta luck next time!
Poetic~Visions: very strong topical,loved your twist on the topic.Had your flow and vocab on lock,good multis here and there...had sum good imagery with the "down to earth"-attitude
which I was definetely feeling. Absolutely loved your ending, had inspiring vibe over it and the emotion was raw. Solid drop!
My vote goes to PoEtIc~V (no hate Heat ) 'cause I was feeling his drop a little more,especially the sense of reality and raw emotion to it. Wasn't close at all and his topical stood out more 2 me
return the favor
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