Thread: Kesse vs SCIP
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Old 03-19-05, 02:29 PM   #42
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Voted For: Kesse

not a difficult choi e really, kesse came off a lot better on all counts.

Open: Kesse was good, nice metaphor in a hard hitting punch. SCIP's was ok but played and not on the level of Kesse.

Closer: Kesse was good again wiv good personal use for the punch that pulled off good. SCIP's wasnt as good, i wasnt feelin the punch really, nice metaphor in the last line but the set up was wack.

Overall: Kesse had a nice verse with good personal punches wiv good uses of metaphors. Good goings, keep up.

SCIP: Your verse was good but below his level. Wat let you down was the flow and structure of the whole thing mostly. But only time will help you on that. Your punches were good but overall Kesse is another standard to you and it showed. But you got the potential. Good luck with all.
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