Voted For: Young Blaze

meh...one sided

phive......i dont know why you change up your structure all the time, but its whack man, keep it consistent, there was nothing too your structure at all....plus the flow was horrible.....stretched lines, not really any good vocab or wordplay....you tried multies, they were okay, but you still need alot of work..your punches weren't even good at all either....you still need alot of elevation.....no hate, but elevate

young, your improving, but you still got alot more room for elevation......structure was off in alot of places....flow decently for the most part.....had some nice punches, alot of stuff was played, some lines were bad setups...so, work alot with vocab and wordplay so can effectively throw a real good punch, nah mean?, word, not bad man...its looks like your getting the idea, but you can still improve alot, keep up

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