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Old 03-19-05, 07:59 PM   #18
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Kesse
Nice Verse Man Punches Was Here They Was Pretty Good, Personals Ey! Wasn't To Much Here But Alright, Vocabulary That's Dope You Always Come With Some Good Vocabulary Here, I Think There Was Only One Personals Here That Shit Was Dope, Structure Ey! You Can Work On That But Yo It's Cool, Only Thing You Didn't Have Here Was Multi's, You Had Everything Else Basically Good Job On This Verse Man Over All Punches Personals Vocabulary Good Job......8.5/10

Glockoma
Punches , Pretty Good Son, You Don't Spit Like A Newb, Personals Iffy Shit Cozzin, Multi's Was Your Best Shit Here, Vocabulary Was Some What Basic, But Good Enough, Meta's Pretty Decent Shit I Was Digging The Opener of This Verse, But The Closer Was Horrible Man, Find Some New Vocabulary My Nigka, Punches In Here Was Also Kind Of Iffy, It Wasn't To Much Of A Hassle To Get Some Better Shit But I Figure You Did Well, And Props For That, Structure You Need To Elevate on That Man For Reals, Both Of You Do...Over All.....8/10

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