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Old 03-19-05, 09:52 PM   #3
Acuity
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beat isnt too bad but you can tell it aint a professional beat justdoesn't have that polished feel.....

lyrics is cool, rhymeschem is not simplistisc which is cool, your flow is good, falls off a lil, hook is cool works well to the beat..lma @ "hit utr bitch ...tonsels.." bar is funny.....deres some nice originality in this...track overall is pretty solid...a more polished beat would have brang it out tho

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182539 - RTF
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