Voted For: Meta4

Aii This IS What It is Ho

Meta

Lemme attack I don't know ya ass but from ya name I kno ya whack//
they said not *dick * riding he said' i don't wanna hop Mr. Cheneys back//
an Aii Opener But Nuttin Special ...Ya first Line Messed it up
his fams fullov ho's and crack heads that explains why Im pimping him//
this is funny I said I would spit somthing dope and his mom tried sniffing em//
Second line was aii .....but like last time ya first line ...BlaAH!!
Imma teacher kid so imma ask yo ass u ready to be taught//
I shot his brains in his hands and he said lemme hold that tought//
Nice ......!
I think up hard shit and what i spit be to damn sick and quick//
If a chick said let me blow ya mind he'll be like yo sure it has a dick//
LOL .....Sort of Played though ....No hate
Advice:Aii Mayne Neva Put Those // Things at the end of ya bars it makes it look stupid and rookie like ./....far as what was in ya verse ...In all ya bars ya first line was Like zzZZ....Then when you put ya second line down it was like oh Ok Niice But Also You cant do that When You battle you gotta hol that strong Position throughout the whole battle ...

Aii

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IP:


I was gonna go easy all you do is bitch though
You could drink bong water and still wouldn’t spit dope
Ummm ....Aii Sort of the same thang he said
Often talking garbage, 313 posts and no stats
Can tell your all talk and no act plus your flows wack
......Nope not cuttin it ..... Try again
Fuck a vote you don’t deserve feedback
And if you do get any it’ll say you be wack
^ That and the last bar is sayin The same thang mayne
You’re like a dogs toy, you’re soft and squeak
Maybe I’m mistaken cause there not as weak
Nope ......That was Even worst
Even Steve wonder could see that ya a bleak rapper
And no one wants to speak to you they just speak at ya
...Nice....Lets see whats next
I can’t even say you fell off cause you ain’t been on yet
Your style can be summed up in two words “played concepts”
.....Damn..... Gettin betta Shouldv said all this earlier
Im like ya dick not to be fucked with, and I also rushed this
Gave you this of death but we aint touch lips..
I Think That is suppose to say kiss of Death ....Rii?....N e way Not a really good closer .....
Advice: Aii First of all dont wait all the way to the end of ya verse to be tryin to get really hot ....>supply that heat from the begging to the end ....Unless ppl may not give you the vote becuase they might not read the rest of ya verse bcuz the beiging bores them ....work on that [/b]

Overall: My vote goes to Meta4