Voted For: Makeveli Trained

kizmiazz~decent opener here, i wasnt crazy about your ~~ everywhere,seemes like you did that to amp up your words, when you came with generic punches, i didnt see any real personals or effectively hard hits in your verse, it was decent but lackluster, you were more safe then anything, decent job..1
Makeveli~ok opener,i see what you tried to do with his name, decent personal, but could have been stronger,the next bar was good, i liked the "feeding off your lines i'd need a tube of paste", pretty good, lmao@ the fruitcakes line..nice to get a laugh from a text battle, the next bar was a good personal about his crew tryout, nice job on this battle verse, you stayed dissin your opponent, and nice,effective closer...i'd say you took this battle, with a more creative verse...nice job.1

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