Voted For: PoEtIc~ViZiOnZ
heat~hmm,this reminded me more of an open mic type drop,it wasnt bad at all, but it seemed to be different, not really my style of drop,but nice twist on the end, even tho it seemed you were talking gang hype, still not bad drop,but not my thing,no hate., i think you could have done better with this topic..1
poetic visionz~nice story line, your vocabulary was good, some spelling errors but they were minor, still,i liked the direction you took the topic in, nice structure and setup, good job..1..vote
oetic visionz