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Old 03-19-05, 10:57 PM   #11
GlocKoma
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Voted For: Da_Throwdest

..The teks in my hand like built up frustation AMH 'Hold In Violence'
& i'm 'Sniping Public Speakers' cuz i get the '[E]thikal 2 result 2 Tyrant

Umm... Ok...

..U awoke a giant, A's knives 'Penetrate Ur Surface Like Cleats'
& have ya 'MIA' like 'Dwaine Wade' ur 'Chest Holdin The Heat'

LoL... Dope Wordplay... Punch = No Though...

i'm neva folding 2 the weak, i speak unique havin ya destiny fall
cuz even if 'I-Peek-At-Chu' i'd still b 'Kicking Poke Balls'!..

Eh... Sloppy...

..dude will poke & crawl & try a 'Stall' like 'New York City Cabs'
cuz i'm put more 'Numbers 2 [E]thik' then he already has!!..

Umm... Ok...

..that's 2 bad, like Allstar specials i'm the 'Sophmore Killin The Rookies'
cuz this 'Shaq-In-The-Wnba' cuz i'm constantly 'Postin-Up-On-Pussies'

Eh... Self Hype...

Overall - You Had Some Nice Wordplay... But Ya Punches Was Lackin'... Structure Was Good Though... I'd Say About A 4.5/10...

dawg check ya verse, cuz im rippin ya facts.
even michael (jackson) is stoppin ya shit, with his dick in ya ass.

Naw... Mj Shyt Iz Played Nigga...

ya lines on hold, dont even fight for votes.
either ya shy or choked, cuz it took you all night to post.

Multies, But No Punch...

wether you like this joke, take this advice i'd hope.
Da_Throwdest, i'll leavin you lookin just like this ho.

Naw... That Shyt Went Out In The 90's...

dont be scared to get embarressed, ya disguise wont help.
though life itself is heaven, then ya lines is hell.

Naw Duke... Shyt Don't Make Sense... Hell On Earth...

despite ya health, ya cant jock a kat like myself.
i'll put my bars in my pants, so you can ride my wealth.

Wdf... Ride Your Bars..? That's Stupid...

Overall - You Had Some Played Concepts... Some Shyt Didn't Make Sense... Structure Was Cool And You Had Multies, But That's About It... I'd Say A 3.5...

Vote - Da_Throwdest... He Superior Wordplay And Structure... Although ethiks Had Superior Multies... Throwdest Was Able To Edge It Out On Punches... And He At Least Attempted Nameplay Which Made His Verse More Personal...
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