Voted For: Hot Sauce

young prophecy~hmm, ok opener,your 2nd bar was stretched a bit,and rhymes doesnt rhyme with hearses, seemed like a floating sentence, you have the idea,but it seems like your forcing words to fit together, not a bad verse,syphillis and dicks doesnt rhyme either, hmm, no effective punches here, and no personals either, could use some work on your verses,no hate, but elevate, try to use personals and mulites, it helps..1
hot sauce~ok, first let me say that your verse is LOUD, not a bad way to set it up, nice opener, strong multies continue through your verse,dope lines, this would sound dope in audio, but since its text,you still have the idea, great rhyme scheme...lol @ the environmentally friendly bar, tight finisher.."i'll put your brain on a crucifix to get your thoughts across", dope line, all in all, i liked your verse,it was harder then your oppponents, the only thing i see wrong is your lines are stretched as well, work on structure, but you take this battle with multies..no hate ..1

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