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Old 03-19-05, 11:12 PM   #11
Parallel
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your stucutre amde my eyes bleed wigka, your punches were flat dry, i wasnt feeling your verse at all, vocab was decent but you really need work on syllable count and your punches wigka, other den that you lost, work on ya punches n flow, most important ight. pz

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not bad im feeling it, ive seen alot better from you tho, great punchlines nice stucutre, good syllable count, i was feeling ya verse alot wigka, keep dopin ya thang this was a 1 man battle you got this hands down on everything. ight peace

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