hmm.. since i was one of the haters.. i feel privileged to tell u this.. it was lacking.. ur style doesnt work when it comes to text simple as that.. you didnt flow.. u had jacked up syllable counts, and mad forced rhymes.. yes ur style is original.. and ur very creative.. but ur shit is soo hard to read.. im not hating on u.. im just tellin u how it is.. 1.

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