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Voted For: Parallel
Drama Queen
you had a great verse i was feelign your poem, nice vocabulary some good stucutre but your lines a little streched if ya knwo what i mean, i saw lots of bad syllable counting there which also through the flow off, but the imagery was pretty good some words in there that i wouldnt have needed but its pretty good voeral some nice emotion i was feeling it...
Parallel
you came pretty good one of your best ive seen in awhile yo, very good imagery, some nice emotion at most points the stucutre was perfect nigka and your syllable coutn was very godo which gave soem nice flow to your poem nigka, keep doin ya thing ya doin good mane.
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