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Old 03-20-05, 04:16 AM   #18
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this was an okay battle

kamikazee...i thought your biggest weakness, was your use of wordplay and creativity with your punches...they came off real simple, nothing special, you had some good ideas going, but you were lacking in the vocab and wordplay, which lessened the effect of your shit....nothing wrong with your flow and structure, you got that down...just try to up the wordplay...and come up with more creative punches, because overall, it was kinda a drag to read.......although, your finisher was pretty hot, good bar there....but flow took this round

flow....hot drop man....the wordplay was amazing, but you also had a few iffy punches....but you stayed consistent, you had more connecting punches/personals, very effective punches too....your flow was great, structure, nothing wrong....tic tac toe line....was kinda whack with the rest of your verse....last 3 bars, thought were the hottest, flowed nicely too....the only criticism i can come up with is....through some multies in there, and maybe up the vocab even....but overall, you took this one for sure

v/flow intel............rtf if you get the chance....wordizzle
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