beat is nice

ur vocals sound muffled...maybe too much noise redux?

I could hear your Eminem impression with the rhyming


Your presence needs to be upped


and the effect on the chorus was blah...

and the Pause-resonse thing you did needed to be exaggerated more to be effective


not a bad track


U got potential with the voice


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RTV please
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