Voted For: Da_Throwdest

MJ GREEN:
man no hate but i think you didnt try here iv'e seen so much better from you...you didnt have any good vocab here it lacked creativity a bit there was a few good metaphores but nothing so creative you know i just felt it lacked that..but you did have a good stucutre and flow thats good...no hate man

Da_Throwdest
that was pretty good man you elevated alot your vocab was alot bettter then shadows and your stucture and flow is alot better now..the creativty and metas were there seen alot of imagery there was very good verse from you i shoulda been looking alot mroe cause your gettin better...damn good job...

opener: Throw
closer: Throw
metas: Throw
Imagery: Throw
flow: Throw
structure: Throw
creativty: Throw
win/ Da_Throw