yes this mos def need better mixing.. (i just woke up) but uhm, the hook was catchy very catchy i as feeling it, the end kinda seem like it ran out cuz half the chorus came thru but uhm i was feeling ya verse but it kinda sounded mechanical.. like the rhyme scheme sound almost exactly the same for each line except when u go towards the end of your verse and i was feeling that a whole lot (versatility in lines).. switch it up a lil' dun let us predict how ur scheme is and be right.. u kno who this is!!!!!!!!! stay up, ma.. 1

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