Thanks for getting me all scared to go to bed now! Meanie! The imagery was amazing, I could really picture those dreams inside my mind (and I fear I'll have similar ones tonight). The vocabulary you used was impeccable, adapted to the content of the piece and had a good balance between basic and complex. You managed to portray the sense of confusion and the struggle the person's going through. You let the readers get into his mind which I definately liked.Had your flow on lock and the structure was good. I absolutely love your writing style, dopeness!

Lmao @ you upping this old shit btw...

DQ

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