*listening*

First thing I noticed was your vocals came in a little loud. Your presence isn't really there yet, and this isn't the type of track where you would try to showcase your presence. Your flow was a little choppy. I think you should get on some faster beats to help you flow a little better. If anythig, it would give you some practice....lol. LMAO @ spit complex like apartment buildings.

The biggest thing I noticed you lacking is the emotion. I can tell that this track had some meaning to you or you wouldn't have called it My Dreams. Put some real emotion into it and I'm willing to bet it turns out 100x better ™

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