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Old 03-20-05, 02:53 PM   #48
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Voted For: Red Bull

Well red bull took this battle for 3 reasons.

1. His verse was more complex and the ending had a twist to it, While tony green kept his verse simple, and tried not to delve too deep into the topic which will always hurt you in the long run.

2. Red Bull took every aspect of a topical battle. He took the vocabulary because tony green didnt have much, the multies were decent. Your structure was definately better than tony's, his lines didnt even match up, i mean you gotta at least get them close to a decent syllable count.

3. Imagery and emotion was present in red's verse but not present in tonys verse, you had a little here and there but red bull went deeper into the topic. But red i would still suggest you stick to text or try elevating quickly with topicals because someone with more topical skills would have ate that verse.

Vote: Red Bull
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